在雅思寫作的過程中，轉(zhuǎn)折鏈接、因果鏈接、遞進鏈接、舉例等都少不了銜接詞的使用，不少同學(xué)雅思寫作錯失高分的原因之一，就是因為句子和段落之間銜接不當(dāng)。下面就來看看雅思寫作銜接詞使用常見問題。
1、銜接詞誤用導(dǎo)致的語法錯誤
a. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction. Because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.
錯誤點：because是連詞，不可單獨成句。
正確的句子：The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction, because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. (選自劍7Test3Task2書后范文）
b. Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products. Such as alcohol and tobacco, however, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.
錯誤點：such as 后加同位語，不可單獨成句；however是副詞，不可連接兩個句子。
正確的句子：Governments ought to restrict advertisements for harmful products, such as alcohol and tobacco. However, they do not have the power to control other forms of advertising.（例句選自考官范文）
2、銜接詞誤用導(dǎo)致的邏輯錯誤
Some people support that education should help students become useful to the society, because students will have more knowledge after being educated.
錯誤點：學(xué)生受教育，變得有學(xué)問這個點和教育應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)學(xué)生貢獻社會沒有明確因果邏輯關(guān)系，使用because這個明顯因果邏輯詞，前后句邏輯混亂。
正確的句子：Education should make students useful members of society because education is financially supported by the government and students who make use of the resource should repay the society.
句子間的邏輯：因為政府資助了教育，所以教育應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)對社會有用的人，回饋社會。邏輯通。
3、“走極端型”的銜接問題
First of all, the late parenthood is because of the rising cost of living. As we all know, young people are often paid less in the working world. Therefore, they are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living. Furthermore, since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. Besides, gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions. However, if they have children early, they have to pay more attention to their family commitment. As a result, they may miss out opportunities to improve their job skills and get promoted.
問題表現(xiàn)：連接詞過度使用，這個段落每一個句子都用了一個連接詞，且不是每個連接都足夠準(zhǔn)確，如furthermore一般多用于補充新觀點。這種寫法就很容易被考官判定為“mechanical writing”，后果是Coherence and Cohesion (連貫與銜接）這一部分的得分不超過6分。
上段可調(diào)整如下：
The late parenthood among young adults is perhaps attributed to the rising cost of living. Young people are often paid less in the working world, sothey are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living if they need to raise a child. Since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. This is why they are unwilling to have children until they are well-prepared. Another reason for this trend is the gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions. If they have children early, they have to pay more attention to their family commitment and may miss out opportunities to improve their job skills and get promoted.
4、常用的銜接方法
①連接詞 （so, since, another reason）
②代詞(they; this; this trend)
③替換&重復(fù) （young people; have children early/late的替換和重復(fù)）
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